Part I
Looking at Literacy in the Graphic Novel Classroom
| 1 | Looking at the Comics Medium Scott McCloudâs Understanding Comics |
âToday, you guys are going to work in groups. Once you get into groups, elect once person to sit in the hallway. Youâll each get a scenario that the remainder of your group must draw together. You cannot add any words to your drawing! The person you elected to leave the classroom will return when every group is done drawing their scenario on the whiteboard, and this person will try to describe his or her teamâs scenario with words. The group whose member provides the most accurate description of his or her groupâs scenario wins! Group 1, hereâs your scenario: a blind man mowing his lawn while his seeing-eye dog relaxes in a hammock. Group 2: a hippie fish protesting a polluted lake. Group 3: . . .â
âMs. Bakis
James Sturmâs âThink Before You Inkâ game is one of the fun, constructive activities I use in the graphic novel classroom to engage students in learning about how to use pictures to communicate and to reinforce the aspects of visual literacy found in Scott McCloudâs Understanding Comics (1993). If you want to learn how to read a graphic novel by understanding the ins and outs of the comics medium, McCloud is the place to begin, though I also highly recommend Will Eisnerâs Graphic Storytelling and Visual Narrative (2008), especially if you are new to graphic novels or are teaching younger students. Eisner provides excellent background in storytelling basics, visual storytelling, the notion of empathy, and use of stereotypes. The reading assessment I use with my students for this text is provided at the companion website (www.corwin.com/graphicnovelclassroom) and highlights the main ideas and concepts about comics and storytelling I like my students to become familiar with before reading graphic novels.
I teach Scott McCloudâs Understanding Comics to help students understand and develop an appreciation for the important role of graphic art, visuals, and other media as communicative tools, as well as to more consciously realize their own role as constructive readers and communicators. McCloud reinforces the interdependent relationship of images and words that prompts students to get beyond the stereotypical perception of the role of images in graphic novels as supplementary or in service to a more important story told in words. Understanding Comics is also a useful tool in helping students exercise visual literacy while reading graphic novels and develop a critical language to better evaluate them beyond their literary merit. Understanding the relationship between form and content is crucial, which is why we begin with McCloud.
TEACHABLE TOPICS, CONCEPTS, AND SKILLS
Table 1.1 highlights important topics and skills associated with teaching Scott McCloudâs Understanding Comics.
FRAMING THE TEXT
I engage students in Understanding Comics by presenting background about Scott McCloud using a TED Talk video featuring the author (McCloud, 2005). Using the interactive whiteboard to project our course social network site, I also bring students to McCloudâs website (www.scottmccloud.com) to read his interactive, online comics narrative called âMy Numberâ and his blog, to look at his work for Google, and to peruse the other resources available to aid their understanding of comics throughout the unit.
Since this is a nonfiction, information-heavy text, as students read chapters of Understanding Comics, I ask them to respond to study guide questions for homework to gauge their initial, independent comprehension of concepts before reviewing and applying them in class activities. The study guide is located at the companion website.
Table 1.1 Teachable Topics, Concepts, and Skills in Scott McCloudâs Understanding Comics
DEFINING COMICS
We begin our classroom exploration of Chapter 1 of Understanding Comics by reviewing McCloudâs brief history of comics, which is based on the way he defines the medium:
My studentsâ compare their initial understanding of how they personally define comics with McCloudâs definition, noting similarities and differences. Like the initial J. P. Toomey TED Talk video (2010), McCloudâs broad definition helps to show students that comics encompass far more than what they initially determined in their original definitions. Making sure students understand the meaning of aesthetic (McCloud, 1993, p. 9) is critical in understanding McCloudâs definition, as well as emphasizing the fact that McCloud does not use the term words in his definition. Contrasting the meaning of aesthetic with its opposite, anesthetic, is one way to do this, for it allows students to put their new knowledge into terms already familiar. Just as empathy is an important part of how readers relate to story, so too is aesthetic response vital in reading sequential art. McCloud later explains in Chapter 2 how words are part of the âother imagesâ (p. 9) given in his comics definition by calling words abstract icons. To emphasize this aspect of the definition, I draw the same example McCloud gives on page 46 in panels 4 and 5 on the whiteboard for students. Contrasting the definition of comics McCloud provides with definitions of genre and art is another important part of teaching Chapter 1 of Understanding Comics. Magnifying the illustration of the water pitcher on page 6, panel 1, is a good way to display this concept clearly for students. Because students often confuse comics as another genre of literature, the distinction is important. Jessica Abel and Matt Maddenâs Drawing Words & Writing Pictures (2008) provides an excellent explanation of comics as a medium that also may be useful for classroom instruction.
LOOKING AT REPRESENTATION, ICONS, AND IDENTITY
Representation is a key concept in Chapter 2 of Understanding Comics and is shown most clearly in McCloudâs famous âThe Treachery of Imagesâ (p. 24â25) example, where the degree to which an idea or object is represented influences the readerâs ability to comprehend its meaning. Also in Chapter 2, the distinction between abstract ideas and sensory objects is important in understanding the variety of ways artists convey story using these tools. The readerâs participation in meaning-making by recognizing and interpreting the manner in which a person, place, thing, or idea is conveyed using lines and space is another important concept in Chapter 2. To reinforce McCloudâs definition of icon on page 27, my students draw realistic and more iconic representations of themselves, as well as symbolic representations, during class (see below). Students draw examples on the whiteboard and we discuss levels of abstraction.
An alternative lesson might be to display various examples of icons in a slideshow presentation and have students answer aloud to which category each belongs, or students might search online for visual images and categorize them according to McCloudâs definitions.
Participation: How Much of You Is in What You See?
The image on page 36 of Understanding Comics refers to reader participation, insofar as we see ourselves and extend our identities into iconic images. According to McCloud, this is a typically human response and part of the way we give meaning to what we see. My students are especially intrigued by this concept and connect it to the idea of empathy previously introduced in Eisnerâs Graphic Storytelling and Visual Narrative.
The less defined the images (the more cartoony), the better able we are to see ourselves or impose ideas and visions of ourselves into such a broadly defined image. McCloud proposes that this also gives us an opportunity to fantasize and play with such conjured visions of ourselves. Another way to understand this is to think of it as the way in which comics art invites readers to be âinâ the story, therefore fostering more intimate engagement with the text. Abbeyâs understanding of this concept is evident in her reading response below:
The degree of empathy depends on how intimately connected the reader feels to what he or she sees while reading. If we can imagine ourselves in a broadly defined image, chances are greater that we will feel as though we are in the story, a technique comics artists regularly exploit. My hope is that students will learn to exploit this technique in their own compositions as well.
Teaching Metacognition
I use McCloudâs notion of identity to prompt studentsâ awareness of their important participation in constructing meaning from graphic narrative and as an opportunity to explicitly teach students about metacognition. Some of the most important questions to ask students who are reading graphic novels include:
⢠What are you doing when you read comics?
⢠What cognitive processes are at work as you view images?
⢠Are you processing an image of an object or an idea?
⢠How do the various types of icons relate to one another?
⢠How does an icon convey meaning?
⢠How much of the meaning you interpret comes from you?
⢠How do the pictures and words work together to make meaning?
Answering such questions is difficult for students at first because they must consciously slow down while they read and reflect on their cognitive habits. Often students believe their lack of comprehension is due to stupidity rather than a lack of understanding of the reading process. So many thought processes occur while reading that it is challenging to consciously think about and name them, but if students can become more aware of their mental processes and behaviors, they can apply strategies to develop and strengthen good reading habits.
LOOKING AT CLOSURE
To understand McCloudâs notion of closure in Chapter 3 of Understanding Comics, I ask students to explain it using their own words, then I ask them to draw. In my experience, students often memorize vocabulary without really thinking about the term or concept and its application, then regurgitate it for a quiz or test, only to forget the word soon after.
Here are some student definitions of closure:
âBeing aware of the âbig pictureâ even though you can only see small fragments of it; you use your life experiences to piece them together.â
âKailey
âFilling the gaps between what we observe with perceptive faith of what is not observed.â
âJane
âClosure equals assuming.â
âJake
âClosure is observing something(s) and not actually taking everything but still understand it because of past experiences.â
âKaitlin
âThe ability to complete a whole story by adding details to individually given parts.â
âDanny
âClosure is when you may not see, hear, or physically sense whatâs there, but you know and assume it is.â
âShayna
Janeâs drawings exhibit her understanding of closure and...